i love two ppl. the most .....
one is my past and another my future
one is the vessel which has just started filling
other is filled upto brim....
one has lot of question in his curious eyes
other has all ans on his wrinkled face..
one has the freshness of life
other has satisfaction of completion...
one brings the desire in me to live
other brings the detachment to leave...
one is virgin as life hasn't touched him
other is virgin b'coz life no longer touches him...
Both are living at two extremities of life ,
BOTH are closer to god ,
one has just arrived from him and
other will just leave to him........
yes one is the child and other old chap.......
one is my past and another my future
one is the vessel which has just started filling
other is filled upto brim....
one has lot of question in his curious eyes
other has all ans on his wrinkled face..
one has the freshness of life
other has satisfaction of completion...
one brings the desire in me to live
other brings the detachment to leave...
one is virgin as life hasn't touched him
other is virgin b'coz life no longer touches him...
Both are living at two extremities of life ,
BOTH are closer to god ,
one has just arrived from him and
other will just leave to him........
yes one is the child and other old chap.......
i think this is one compostion beautifully written..
ReplyDeleteHey I really love the comparison that u have made between past and future. and also the similiarities, very nice.. happy writing :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your valuable comments !!!
ReplyDeleteThoughts beautifully poured down!! ..
ReplyDeleteThanks miss Anonymous(Miss P)
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